Blame SOURCES/0033-Message-string-cleanups.patch

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From 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
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From: William Jon McCann <william.jon.mccann@gmail.com>
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Date: Fri, 7 Jun 2013 11:09:04 -0400
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Subject: [PATCH] Message string cleanups
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Make use of terminology consistent. Remove jargon.
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---
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 grub-core/normal/menu_text.c | 21 +++++++++------------
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 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/grub-core/normal/menu_text.c b/grub-core/normal/menu_text.c
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index a3d1f23f6..64a83862f 100644
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--- a/grub-core/normal/menu_text.c
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+++ b/grub-core/normal/menu_text.c
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@@ -157,9 +157,8 @@ print_message (int nested, int edit, struct grub_term_output *term, int dry_run)
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   if (edit)
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     {
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-      ret += grub_print_message_indented_real (_("Minimum Emacs-like screen editing is \
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-supported. TAB lists completions. Press Ctrl-x or F10 to boot, Ctrl-c or F2 for a \
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-command-line or ESC to discard edits and return to the GRUB menu."),
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+      ret += grub_print_message_indented_real (_("Press Ctrl-x or F10 to start, Ctrl-c or F2 for a \
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+command prompt or Escape to discard edits and return to the menu. Pressing Tab lists possible completions."),
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 					       STANDARD_MARGIN, STANDARD_MARGIN,
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 					       term, dry_run);
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     }
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@@ -167,8 +166,8 @@ command-line or ESC to discard edits and return to the GRUB menu."),
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     {
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       char *msg_translated;
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-      msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("Use the %C and %C keys to select which "
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-					 "entry is highlighted."),
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+      msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("Use the %C and %C keys to change the "
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+					 "selection."),
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 				       GRUB_UNICODE_UPARROW,
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 				       GRUB_UNICODE_DOWNARROW);
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       if (!msg_translated)
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@@ -181,17 +180,15 @@ command-line or ESC to discard edits and return to the GRUB menu."),
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       if (nested)
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 	{
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 	  ret += grub_print_message_indented_real
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-	    (_("Press enter to boot the selected OS, "
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-	       "`e' to edit the commands before booting "
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-	       "or `c' for a command-line. ESC to return previous menu."),
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+	    (_("Press 'e' to edit the selected item, "
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+	       "or 'c' for a command prompt. Press Escape to return to the previous menu."),
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 	     STANDARD_MARGIN, STANDARD_MARGIN, term, dry_run);
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 	}
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       else
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 	{
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 	  ret += grub_print_message_indented_real
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-	    (_("Press enter to boot the selected OS, "
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-	       "`e' to edit the commands before booting "
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-	       "or `c' for a command-line."),
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+	    (_("Press 'e' to edit the selected item, "
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+	       "or 'c' for a command prompt."),
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 	     STANDARD_MARGIN, STANDARD_MARGIN, term, dry_run);
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 	}	
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     }
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@@ -443,7 +440,7 @@ menu_text_print_timeout (int timeout, void *dataptr)
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       || data->timeout_msg == TIMEOUT_TERSE_NO_MARGIN)
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     msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("%ds"), timeout);
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   else
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-    msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("The highlighted entry will be executed automatically in %ds."), timeout);
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+    msg_translated = grub_xasprintf (_("The selected entry will be started automatically in %ds."), timeout);
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   if (!msg_translated)
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     {
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       grub_print_error ();