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From 24f82a86f4d61809f9eb913c1244a4a6df7ba896 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
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From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
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Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2013 02:47:45 +0100
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Subject: [PATCH] man: grammar and wording improvements
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This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to:
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- missing words, preposition choice.
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- change of /lib to /usr/lib, because that is what most distros are
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using as the system-wide location for systemd/udev files.
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Conflicts:
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man/journalctl.xml
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man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml
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man/sd_bus_request_name.xml
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man/systemctl.xml
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man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
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man/systemd.device.xml
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man/systemd.exec.xml
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man/systemd.timer.xml
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man/udev.xml
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---
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man/daemon.xml | 2 +-
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man/sd_is_fifo.xml | 2 +-
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man/systemd.service.xml | 2 +-
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man/systemd.unit.xml | 2 +-
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4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml
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index 7790420..1fe4546 100644
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--- a/man/daemon.xml
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+++ b/man/daemon.xml
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@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@
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description files.</para>
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<para>In systemd, if the developer or
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- administrator wants to make sure a service or
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+ administrator wants to make sure that a service or
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other unit is activated automatically on boot,
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it is recommended to place a symlink to the
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unit file in the <filename>.wants/</filename>
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diff --git a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
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index 4bb2236..58cd1c9 100644
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--- a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
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+++ b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
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@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
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called to check whether the specified file descriptor
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refers to a special file. If the
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<parameter>path</parameter> parameter is not
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- <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether file
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+ <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether the file
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descriptor is bound to the specified file
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name. Special files in this context are character
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device nodes and files in <filename>/proc</filename>
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diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml
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index e869f95..e3a370f 100644
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--- a/man/systemd.service.xml
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+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml
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@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@
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<programlisting>ExecStart=/bin/sh -c 'dmesg | tac'
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</programlisting>
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- <para>Only select environment variables
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+ <para>Only select environment variables that
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are set for executed commands. See
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<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
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</para>
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diff --git a/man/systemd.unit.xml b/man/systemd.unit.xml
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index b70c5e9..f6b4b24 100644
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--- a/man/systemd.unit.xml
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+++ b/man/systemd.unit.xml
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@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@
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of units. When systemd stops or restarts
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the units listed here, the action is
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propagated to this unit.
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- Note that this is a one way dependency —
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+ Note that this is a one-way dependency —
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changes to this unit do not affect the
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listed units.
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</para></listitem>
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